UberKuri's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Elite Beat Roshi]

Needs Colour ><

Graphics: All the characters were sketched pretty well, and the little FBF and gunfire you did was done pretty well also. To really up the votes I do think it needs colour though, and try to do some voice-character syncing.

Style: Most of the animation was single sketches, like a fast slideshow, so maybe you should try FBF animation, otherwise, this wasn't the best animating I've seen =\

Sound: It synced pretty well, but try mouth sycning.

Violence: Pretty random and all over the place, which isn't bad I guess lol

Interactivity: None

Humour: Most of this was pretty random, especially the joke that led to getting shot in the face.

Overall: This was not badly done overall, but voice syncing and colour would definately help this flash go along, and give viewers more interest.

[Halo 3elieve]

Not Bad

Graphics: The simple drawings that weren't sticks, but try not to include sticks in your flash at all, sticking to the little more complex ones.

Style: Very fast and random, gained lulz.

Sound: The voices were very annoying, so scratchy. Try to get a new mic, or a new program to increase the quality of your voice recording.

Violence: Pretty randomly done, but lol it's aight.

Interactivity: None

Humour: Random humour is all good.

Overall: This wasn't that badly done. Just step away from sticks, and it does really need better quality audio.

[mistery]

Good design

Graphics: The graphics were really well drawn, nothing much to complain about there.

Style: The animation was pretty smooth, and you represented people's reactions/emotions well, with the lack of audio.

Sound: Adding backing music, or vocal effects would really help interest viewers, and gain higher scores.

Violence: No real violence here.

Interactivity: None

Humour: None

Overall: This was really well done, and it would've been much better if audio had been included, which is really my only problem here.

[M16 Short]

Nice

Graphics: The graphics is this were really well done, but more effort should be put into the background. Besides the background, the firing and explosion was done very well =]

Style: Animated very smoothly, and the way the camera movement was shuddering was really great.

Sound: Everything synced really well, good job.

Violence: Pretty good, and the explosion was done pretty well, but could still use a little work.

Interactivity: None

Humour: Dude the guy got owned, pretty well.

Overall: This was really well animated and drawn, but even for a short this is too short :P This could definately develop into a longer fight SERIES, if you get good ideas along the way. So, make it longer and it'll help.

[Grand Theft Semi-Auto]

Nice

Graphics: They were pretty well drawn, and the syncing was well done =D

Style: Familiar.

Sound: The voices were a bit choppy, try getting a better mike/program.

Violence: None.

Interactivity: None.

Humour: Pretty well done ;)

Overall: The graphics were really well done, and the backgrounds were good too. You can sync well, but one of the things that would lower the votes are the voices, they are really choppy.

Blakant responds:

Oh, alright... I'll try to do better next time... and I rlly appreciate that u spent ur time on my flash movie & review it too!
So I hope that this movie dint dissapointed u for ur time! =)

[Halo 3: Episode 1]

Great

Graphics: These were well drawn, nothing to complain about here.

Style: Good I guess xP

Sound: Nice, the quality was good and the script was nice aswell.

Violence: Not really much to talk about here.

Interactivity: The play button lol

Humour: Pretty good, but the pace really took the laughs out of it.

Overall: This was well designed, but it went on pretty slowly. Up the pace of the movie and quicken the dialogue and it will make it much more amusing/funny.

[Sigfried Johan: Golf]

Potential

Graphics: They need alot of work, try to give the characters more detail, and try to stedily float away from stick figures, at your own pace though. Also add a background ;)

Style: Needs work lol

Sound: Voices were a bit fuzzy, but that's ok.

Violence: Did the father vomit blood all over the son?

Interactivity: None

Humour: This had some alright jokes in it, but they need to be accompanied by good graphics.

Overall: As I said before, this could be a really good series, it has the right ideas, but it needs good graphics to accompany them.

[Late Night Walk]

Not Bad

Graphics: They were pretty well drawn, and the shadowing was done pretty well, not much work needed on that IMHO.

Style: The animation was a little stiff, robotic, you can use

Sound: The song was pretty good, and so was the quality.

Violence: Did that hobo get shot?

Interactivity: None

Humour: No real humour.

Overall: Your design and animation isn't that bad, I suggest you try syncing voices and lips, and then moving on to bigger and better projects, with plot line etc.

pirokid responds:

Thanks for your comment, and yeah i am working on a series call capital hill....here is the link http://pirokidproductions.com/www/cap italhill.html