UberKuri's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Picard Song]

Average

Graphics: The graphics weren't that well drawn, but atleast you can tell who/what they are :P Design is definately needing improvement here, in characters and other objects, and try adding a background.

Style: The animation was stiff, try using the ease feature, which would help smooth it out. You synced in time with the music well though =]

Sound: Sound was fine, nothing bad here, good syncing.

Violence: None

Interactivity: None

Humour: Most of the humour was brought about by the song, but you used some of the lyrics well to get a laff =]

Overall: Umm, this needs to be better drawn, and there are tutorials to help you with that, though you don't have to follow them and you can try to get your own style going, but you should follow the great tutorials NG has about animating, they could really help in your submissions.

-Kuri

CorellonL responds:

Thank you, I actually did learn everything I know from the NG tutorials, I would be lost without the All-In-One Tutorial Part I. The disambiguation of your score certainly helps. And I WILL draw it better this weekend.

[-SG- KickAss Intro]

Pretty Good

Graphics: Great graphics in this too be honest, you got the bloog down really well.

Style: The animation was pretty well done, done at a great fast pace, no problems here.

Sound: This is what needs work, if you wanted to have it without sound on purpose, then OK, but this still needs backing music and sound effects to really interest people ;)

Violence: Well animated, once again, no problems here.

Interactivity: None

Humour: Great that you went after StrawberryClock xD

Overall: This was a pretty good flash, it had good animation and all the rest, but it really needed to have sound added to it.

- Kuri

DeathShades responds:

Thank you for the review. I have been told I needed more sound... The official version will be posted on our website, and it will have sound. I would put it here but... they don't quite like doubleposting...

[Cuties]

Ngawww ^^

Graphics: The graphics were pretty simple, but that worked well for the movie. Though I think you should add a more detailed background.

Style: The animation seemed a little stiff, but that's ok. I liked the way they walked, or rolled lol. You can sync well, so that's good.

Sound: The sound was well done, the quality of the recordings was pretty good, cute voices.

Violence: Animated OK, but it wasn't too bad.

Interactivity: None

Humour: I actually laughed when the guy started vomiting, and then the reaction of the main characters face xD Nice job dude.

Overall: Despite the very simple designs, this flash was pretty well done, with a seriously unexpected twist at the end for me ;) Keep it up man.

-Kuri :3

JunkYardAnimations responds:

hahaha thanks man, this one was probably my most innocent flash, and the style was not like my style at all.

[-3 Day Weekend-]

Poor ><

Graphics: Sticks, which doesn't leave much to say. The backgrounds weren't too clean either, I think you need to take more time with them, try to have cleaner lines instead of plain scribble, know what I mean?

Style: Uuum, the animation wasn't TOO bad, but you can definately improved. I think that if the size of the characters was increased, the animation would look better and be a little easier to animate. And, try to increase the pace of this submission aswell, went slow for me and got a little boring.

Sound: You're choice of song is good as usual :3 Adding sound effects would also help your submissions, for when he hits the ground, hits other people etc.

Violence: When he threw them to the ground, the action was really slow, you need to make the FBF go faster when doing stuff like that.

Interactivity: Buttons :3

Humour: He just HAPPENED to make those impossible jumps and the other people didn't aye? RIGHT lol xP

Overall: Ehh, I know you know that stick figures don't really do it for me, and if you had better graphics this would improve ratings greatly. One other thing I hadn't touched on was camera angles, try and move the angles around to like, front views, close-ups etc., it would become more interesting ;)

<3

-Kuri

Lost-Wisdom responds:

Surprising you still vote 10 for everything I do, I find it makes me very happy! I know my animations are pretty much subpar, and I don't even think I'm improving.

Although a user is helping me with great advice, I do think I need to learn more.

Thanks for the great review.

[Charlie The Unicombat]

Great

Graphics: The graphics were done pretty well, the blood was pretty good too ;)

Style: The animating in this was done pretty well, despite having near-static unicorns for characters. I definately loled at the explanations of how he got the bandages, and the horn fight was very well done.

Sound: Great music, I really need to find a copy of that lol. Uuum, the sycning was done spot on, so there isn't anything to complain about in sound.

Violence: The violence was well done, so good work here.

Interactivity: None

Humour: This was filled with laughs, the facial features, and the falling down the staircase part was hilarious.

Overall: This was a really good flash, and I can't think of many bad things to say here, except that the static unicorns could be better, with more movement to the whole body, though I know that is a hard thing to do, so that isn't a big problem =]

-Kuri

digitalk responds:

Yeah, the unicorn pictures where a letdown, i wish i had more of them

[Machete.]

Needs Work

Graphics: These were just basicly circles, yeah? Try to do more detailed designs of your characters, with better faces etc.

Style: The animation in this wasn't the best, it went rather slowly. Instead of having the whole body on a single layer, put different body parts on different layers, so that you can animate them individually, and make it look better, and smoother, with everything matching up.

Sound: You had a pretty good choice of song, that was OK. But, you may need a tiny bit of work on syncing effects and the movie, it was just a little bit off. Only a little, so don't get too crazy about it.

Violence: Pretty ordinary, which was mainly because of the not-so-high standard of animating.

Interactivity: None

Humour: Was just killing really,

Overall: Ok, so, the design needs work, as does your animating, but you have good taste in music, and your syncing isn't too bad. There are lots of tutorials etc. out there that can help you in all these categories, so you can improve =]

~Kuri

Frenzy responds:

Thanks for the great review!

~ Z

[SKATER V2 Episode: 03]

Great

Graphics: Good as usual =D

Style: Lol, awesome.

Sound: Synced great, good choice of music.

Violence: Performed pretty well =]

Interactivity: None xP

Humour: Great as usual

Overall: There isn't much I can complain about in this one, or in any of them. Keep up the great work man.

MarcyVF responds:

Thanks a lot, I appriciate that you take your time to write long reviews.
Halloween special under construction! :]

.M.

[Gallery]

Good

Graphics: Graphics were very well drawn, nice work.

Style: You know how to FBF and the other way, but it was pretty nicely done, loved the eye movements.

Sound: I'm not sure if this is Newgrounds server mucking up, 'cause I would expect sound from something drawn this well. If not, add sound, it got a little bit boring without music to keep me in this flash.

Violence: None

Interactivity: None

Humour: Lol, you got some humour man.

Overall: This was really well drawn, but it is really only half complete without some audio, so you need to add that.

SteelMullet responds:

Thank you very much. I'm glad you mentioned the sound, as it was designed to have sound. I basically had 2 weeks to complete this animation and had no time to implement anything else. I do intend to add sound eventually though, so I'm pleased you reviewed my work.

Thanks again.

Steelmullet

[Grand Theft Semi-Auto]

Nice

Graphics: They were pretty well drawn, and the syncing was well done =D

Style: Familiar.

Sound: The voices were a bit choppy, try getting a better mike/program.

Violence: None.

Interactivity: None.

Humour: Pretty well done ;)

Overall: The graphics were really well done, and the backgrounds were good too. You can sync well, but one of the things that would lower the votes are the voices, they are really choppy.

Blakant responds:

Oh, alright... I'll try to do better next time... and I rlly appreciate that u spent ur time on my flash movie & review it too!
So I hope that this movie dint dissapointed u for ur time! =)

[Ears: Deliverance]

Nice

Graphics: Animation was good, as were the graphics.

Style: Pretty unique, but kinda reminiscent of the way the ClockCrew would animate sound/voices.

Sound: Good sound, you synced it pretty well too.

Violence: YOU SHOT THE EAR

Interactivity: Buttons lol

Humour: Instrument playing ears? 'Nuff said.

Overall: You animated this pretty well, but I kinda see it hard to evolve into a series. Maybe you should have a funeral or investigation into the ear's death, that could draw it on I s'pose.

Enjoyed it ;)

thornebush5 responds:

Thanks for the review. There's most likely more to come.