Age/Gender: 15, Male
Location: Australia
Job: Student
When a ninja dives into the ocean, the ninja doesn't get wet, the ocean gets ninja.
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Graphics: The graphics in this were extremely well done IMHO, there was great detail and colour, and the blood was done really well also.
Style: The animation was a bit jumpy at the start, but it got a lot better as the movie went along. I think that you should make another, much longer submission along the lines of this, with a storyline, etc, that would be really good.
Sound: The music was great and went really well with the movie, but sound effects could've helped it a great deal.
Violence: The blood was WELL DONE =D
Interactivity: None.
Humour: None.
Overall: A real good Flash, but what I think dragged the score down was the length of it. As I said earlier, making a longer flash with a story behind would be great.
- Kuri
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Graphics: The graphics weren't that well drawn, but atleast you can tell who/what they are :P Design is definately needing improvement here, in characters and other objects, and try adding a background.
Style: The animation was stiff, try using the ease feature, which would help smooth it out. You synced in time with the music well though =]
Sound: Sound was fine, nothing bad here, good syncing.
Violence: None
Interactivity: None
Humour: Most of the humour was brought about by the song, but you used some of the lyrics well to get a laff =]
Overall: Umm, this needs to be better drawn, and there are tutorials to help you with that, though you don't have to follow them and you can try to get your own style going, but you should follow the great tutorials NG has about animating, they could really help in your submissions.
-Kuri
Author's Response:
Thank you, I actually did learn everything I know from the NG tutorials, I would be lost without the All-In-One Tutorial Part I. The disambiguation of your score certainly helps. And I WILL draw it better this weekend.
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Graphics: Great graphics in this too be honest, you got the bloog down really well.
Style: The animation was pretty well done, done at a great fast pace, no problems here.
Sound: This is what needs work, if you wanted to have it without sound on purpose, then OK, but this still needs backing music and sound effects to really interest people ;)
Violence: Well animated, once again, no problems here.
Interactivity: None
Humour: Great that you went after StrawberryClock xD
Overall: This was a pretty good flash, it had good animation and all the rest, but it really needed to have sound added to it.
- Kuri
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I have been told I needed more sound... The official version will be posted on our website, and it will have sound. I would put it here but... they don't quite like doubleposting...
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In my opinion that was an alright song, though it got a bit old really quickly towards the end.
Nothing much wrong though IMHO.
-Kuri
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It was OK for all the way through, but I just felt like it was missing something. The drums that came in near the end should've come in earlier IMHO.
It still sounds good though :3
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For me, this had a really good pace, and was nice and simple. I really enjoyed it.
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